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Medical Dumps for Writers: In Vitro Fertilization



As a writer with prior medical experience, I know that having authentically written medical plots is extremely important. Extensive research is required to dive into complicated subjects, and some writers simply won't do it. Today we're going to talk a little about IVF and its process in a fictional context. This is not true medical advice, nor am I a licensed medical professional.


In-vitro fertilization (IVF) has come a long way since its inception. As a writer of fiction, understanding the complex world of IVF can lend authenticity and depth to your work, whether you're writing about the emotional journey of a couple seeking parenthood or exploring the ethical implications of genetic selection.


The journey to IVF began in the early 20th century when scientists started exploring ways to fertilize eggs outside of the female body. However, it wasn't until the late 1970s that IVF started to work. The first successful IVF procedure took place in England in 1978 when Louise Brown, the world's first "test-tube baby," was born. This groundbreaking achievement was the result of the tireless efforts of Dr. Robert G. Edwards and Dr. Patrick Steptoe, who dedicated their careers to making IVF a reality. Since then, IVF has become a widely accepted and accessible treatment for infertility, allowing countless families to conceive children they may not have been able to otherwise.


To help you accurately portray the IVF process in your writing, I've broken it down into several steps:

  1. Ovarian stimulation: The woman receives hormone injections to stimulate her ovaries to produce multiple eggs. This process usually takes about two weeks and involves regular monitoring through blood tests and ultrasounds.

  2. Egg retrieval: Once the eggs have matured, a surgeon retrieves them through a minor surgical procedure. The woman is sedated, and they insert a needle through the vaginal wall to collect the eggs.

  3. Insemination and fertilization: The collected eggs are then combined with sperm in a laboratory dish. In some cases, ICSI is used, where a single sperm is injected directly into an egg to increase the chances of fertilization.

  4. Embryo development: The fertilized eggs, now embryos, are incubated and monitored for three to five days as they develop.

  5. Embryo selection: If preimplantation genetic testing (PGT) is being utilized, the embryos will be tested for genetic abnormalities or specific genetic conditions. Only healthy embryos will be considered for transfer.

  6. Embryo transfer: One or more embryos are transferred into the woman's uterus through a catheter inserted through the cervix. Any additional viable embryos may be frozen for future use.

  7. Pregnancy test: About two weeks after the embryo transfer, a blood test is performed to determine if the woman is pregnant.

One of the most significant advancements in IVF is the ability to screen embryos for genetic conditions before implantation. This is beneficial for couples who have a family history of genetic disorders or are known carriers of certain conditions, such as Marfan syndrome or Huntington's disease.


As a fiction writer, exploring the ethical implications of genetic selection in IVF can provide a thought-provoking and emotionally charged backdrop for your story. While PGT offers numerous benefits, it also raises ethical questions about the selection and potential discarding of embryos based on their genetic makeup.


Some critics argue that selecting embryos based on genetics could lead to a slippery slope toward "designer babies," where parents might choose traits such as intelligence, appearance, or athletic ability. There are additional concerns about the potential devaluation of individuals with disabilities and losing genetic diversity in the population.


Conversely, proponents of PGT argue that the technology provides couples with the opportunity to have healthy children, preventing the suffering and emotional turmoil that can come from dealing with a severe genetic condition. They contend PGT offers families the chance to make informed decisions about their reproductive choices and ultimately improve their quality of life.


Understanding the history, process, and potential of IVF can enhance your fiction writing, offering a realistic portrayal of the complex emotions and ethical dilemmas surrounding assisted reproduction. As you delve into the world of IVF, remember to portray the journey with sensitivity and accuracy, recognizing that the experience is deeply personal and unique for each individual and couple involved.


As a writer, you have the opportunity to not only educate your readers about IVF but also to spark thoughtful discussions about the ethical implications of genetic selection. By exploring these topics in your fiction, you can contribute to a broader conversation about the role of science and technology in shaping our lives and the decisions we make about our families and future generations.


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